Our planned revisions are to change our credits. The rough draft had the credits roll on a black screen at the end of the clip. This feature created a feeling that the film was over, making it appear as a short film. Since this is actually the opening to a full length film we have decided to change the credits. Instead of having them roll at the end, they will appear on screen as the film begins. Many of the films we watched while doing research also used this technique. This technique was effective for these films and created the same feeling that we are trying to achieve. By incorporating the credits on top of part of the film, there will also be more time available to insert another short clip. This will make the clip feel more like an opening, as opposed to a short film. The credits should overall improve the film and make it read as planned.